These keys
That I tap
For sonic delight
And literary sunlight
Produce packets
Of ancient lore
Covered by cobwebs of thought-bore
I blow away
The colluding threads
With the breath of my dreams
So do you see them now?
Lilac-colored tales
From the digital entrails
Of the cyberoptic underground
Cyberoptic
11 responses to “Cyberoptic”
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I see them now … 🙂
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hey thats clever and cute too! 😉
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very fluid…one of those i like to read out loud…..”with the breath of my dreams” sounds mysterious to me. great poem.
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a mix of technology and romance in poetry. original yet not heavy-handed. well done!
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Mmm…Lilac colored tales…sounds nostalgic.
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hey thats a very unusual combo..a metallic body with a soft human heart! loved the ‘literary sunlight’ and ‘lilac coloured tales’ 🙂
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:A: *smiles*
gulnaz, lorena and transience: thank you very much..
dancing_starz: a warm welcome to you..and I’d love to visit you if you can leave a link behind…hmm…actually it was not about nostalgia…more about cyber-cool…
pincushion: you know what…of all you got very close to what I had meant to convey with this poem…thank you!
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I really like this one. I read it aloud and it sounded fairytale-like. A sprite should read it. A digital one.
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finnegan: thank you…a digital sprite is very appropriate for this actually!
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Funky nostalgia and cyber imagination — all in one! Wow!!
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Anonymous Poet: *smiles* an apt description that…thank you…
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