Disparate Dreams

17 responses to “Disparate Dreams”

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   lorena

   July 8, 2005

   wow, i’m floored by such beautiful words. “your call-my evening star”
   how lovely. you write such fluid poetry. thanks 🙂

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2. 

   yvaine

   July 8, 2005

   Wow, your words make beautiful music.

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3. 

   :..M..:

   July 8, 2005

   Excellent. There’s such beauty in these words..such palpable, sublime love.

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4. 

   Soulless

   July 8, 2005

   This makes me want to swoon . Heehee.

   It’s your breath
   That gives shape
   To the love lining
   My falling tear drops

   …Sigh.

   Your mouth
   Wraps around my words

   …Thud. ^_^

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5. 

   transience

   July 9, 2005

   the second to the last verse took my breath away.

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6. 

   ellipses_M

   July 9, 2005

   Its such a solace to come by your site. Love bubbles up in between your words and it seems your hands shape your words as the sculptor labors to shape a piece of wood into what he sees it spring from in the first place! I know I know…last sentence was a bit vague;-)

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7. 

   Kaveri

   July 10, 2005

   This reminds me of a song called, “Kiss the Rain”, by Billie Myers. Sometimes, all you can do is write to vent the suffocation of loneliness, to fill the distance with pure and boundless thoughts to reach her. Look up at the crescent moon tonight, Anil, and dream that she sees it, and feels you on the other side.

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8. 

   Nasra Al Adawi

   July 10, 2005

   I loved it…As if the words were recited for me and if it was I will surely be high over cloud number 9

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9. 

   gulnaz

   July 10, 2005

   i love the sensualite in this one. splendid!
   :))

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10. 

    finnegan

    July 10, 2005

    i wish i were in love like this. i’d probably lose a lot of sleep and get nothing done.
    i could imagine this being how narcissus spoke to his reflection.

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11. 

    anil

    July 12, 2005

    lorena: *grinning* to floor such a beautiful lady as you is no mean achievement! thank you…

    yvaine: ah a warm welcome to you here…and thank you…

    :M: oh thank you so much for your lovely words!

    soulless: oh wait…let me come and catch you swooning into my arms!! would love that…

    transience: thank you

    ellipses_M: no…no it was not vague at all…I understood perfectly what you were trying to say and I feel honoured that you think of my writing in such high terms…thank you…

    Kaveri: I wish I could do as you suggested in your beautiful comment and find solace in the world around me but it is not always possible…

    Nasra: lets hope someone will do that some day…and thank you for your wonderful words…

    gulnaz: why thank you!

    finnegan: *smiles* true…very true…so moral of the story is do not fall in love!!!

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12. 

    teleute

    July 12, 2005

    this is just stunning.

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13. 

    Martin

    July 12, 2005

    Very good poem. I can relate to the redolent sadness in your poems. I think we have felt and lived some similar times 🙂

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14. 

    stella

    July 13, 2005

    this poem reminds me of a botticelli venus…so beautiful and breathtaking.

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15. 

    . : A : .

    July 13, 2005

    Beautiful ending,

    “It is evening
    And I await
    Your call-
    My evening star”

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16. 

    anil

    July 14, 2005

    teleute: thank you!

    Martin: we all pass through similar life experiences….I’m glad that I could make you relate to my experiences….

    stella: wow! to be compared to such a beautiful and exquisite painting is a great honor…I dont know if I deserve such high praise….thank you so much!

    :A: thank you…it is one of my favorite parts too!

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17. 

    Anonymous Poet

    July 27, 2005

    I love the lines:

    Your mouth
    Wraps around my words
    Rolling them around
    Like fresh green grapes

    ——–

    I thought I felt
    You yesterday
    In a thought that
    Kissed my lonely lips

    They have such a simple sensuality about them. Remarkable.

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