Comments on: Thesis

By: anil

anil — Fri, 05 Aug 2005 17:36:54 +0000

lorena: you are such a dear..always saying such nice things about my words…as always thank you so much..but don’t be sad..this was meant to celebrate love…

By: lorena

lorena — Wed, 03 Aug 2005 20:25:10 +0000

WOW. this was so sensual, so beautiful.
“My eyes-
Mirrors of love
Swirling with
Fragments of you”
be still my heart ;)

and it ends so sadly and it makes me sad.

By: anil

anil — Wed, 03 Aug 2005 07:48:28 +0000

Geetanjali: I think I’ll drop you a line and answer your questions…but thank you for your critical input…

stella: as always thanks a lot for your warm words…you are a dear…

finegan: you know what I coudn’t help but burst out laughing at your comment…ah but I guess I do not have your talent with women otherwise I’d have had a harem by now!! and thank you….

By: finnegan

finnegan — Tue, 02 Aug 2005 19:11:25 +0000

These words ache, they are so lovely. If I could write like this, I’d be able to attract a harem.

By: stella

stella — Mon, 01 Aug 2005 23:28:56 +0000

i can feel the aching in my heart through the expression of your words. ‘my eyes-mirrors of love’ – such a true reflection of the depth of one’s emotions… you touched upon it with such precision. nice.

By: Geetanjali

Geetanjali — Mon, 01 Aug 2005 07:47:25 +0000

Tell me again, pourquoi tu ne veut pas lire tes poemes romantiques en public? C’est vrai, que qulequ-un a dit – you have the heart of a true romantic. Ces poemes sont vraiment romantique…:-)

The anti-thesis compliments it beautifully – completing a story often left open for the reader to fill in blanks…which s/he normally would fill in optimistic tones…harder-hitting your version, but also so true…and as always very very poignant. Lyrical. Reads well.
(Why are comments off for that one?)

By: anil

anil — Sun, 31 Jul 2005 10:35:01 +0000

*takes a bow* thank you all very much, truly…

By: Anonymous Poet

Anonymous Poet — Sat, 30 Jul 2005 22:34:26 +0000

This piece has such a wonderful sensuality about it.

Especially, I love the lines: “Tasting the smile
Underneath.” That’s wonderful.

Also: “Finding, feeling Love’s many shapes” That’s so sensual.

The last line is so poignant.

By: Soulless

Soulless — Sat, 30 Jul 2005 19:25:29 +0000

The last stanza reminds me of standing at a field, alone to face the sky, hurling both words and soul to the heavens. Sigh. You have touched a chord in my soul yet again. ^_^

By: gulnaz

gulnaz — Sat, 30 Jul 2005 18:41:39 +0000

romance dripping of these words here!!
what a lovely poem of love you have written here. :)

By: paddy

paddy — Sat, 30 Jul 2005 15:48:03 +0000

wow now that is for sure written for someone special

By: . : A : .

. : A : . — Sat, 30 Jul 2005 00:29:57 +0000

Very romantically written, Anil. I like how your versitality moves from piece to piece.

By: Mermaid

Mermaid — Thu, 28 Jul 2005 16:38:51 +0000

“My eyes-
Mirrors of love
Swirling with
Fragments of you”

I still am speechless as to how a sci-fi writer can be so good with love poetry as well.

By: transience

transience — Thu, 28 Jul 2005 10:06:03 +0000

god, you have the heart of a true romantic.

By: samudra

samudra — Thu, 28 Jul 2005 09:04:24 +0000

Tasting the smile
Underneath…….

Every line there,so fervent,so full of pain and love…….and the enormous feeling expressed so succintly,amazing one this!

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