Comments on: Exordium III http://anilcherukupalli.com/blog/2005/06/01/exordium-iii/ A little bit of everything Mon, 30 Jan 2012 19:21:41 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: anil http://anilcherukupalli.com/blog/2005/06/01/exordium-iii/comment-page-1/#comment-164 anil Tue, 12 Jul 2005 09:36:55 +0000 http://arthedains.com/blog/?p=2#comment-164 Nasra: hmm...interesting thought that...it does flow visually when you join them up but then I guess I separated them bcos each verse talks abt a new thing.... Nasra: hmm…interesting thought that…it does flow visually when you join them up but then I guess I separated them bcos each verse talks abt a new thing….

]]> By: Nasra Al Adawi http://anilcherukupalli.com/blog/2005/06/01/exordium-iii/comment-page-1/#comment-158 Nasra Al Adawi Mon, 11 Jul 2005 08:42:57 +0000 http://arthedains.com/blog/?p=2#comment-158 I enjoyed reading this one I wanted To talk aloud So I kissed my fingers Now You can see The whispers they weave From the threads of love and pain, again However I would have thought you should have said: I wanted To talk aloud So I kissed your fingers Now You can see The whispers they weave From the threads of love and pain, again I enjoyed reading this one

I wanted
To talk aloud
So I kissed my fingers
Now
You can see
The whispers they weave
From the threads of love and pain, again

However I would have thought you should have said:

I wanted
To talk aloud
So I kissed your fingers
Now
You can see
The whispers they weave
From the threads of love and pain, again

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